Friday, 2 December 2011

PAULS BOUTIQUE ADVERT


In this task we was asked to make an advert on any product. I was working in a group with Afsana. We first decided to do are advert on ERA HATS however are footage didn't come out really good, so we decided to change everything and do are advert on PAUL'S BOUTIQUE BAGS.
First we had people modeling the bags however we cut out the faces because we thought the audience will pay to much attention to them.Then at the end of the advert we had two pictures on the side with two girls holding Paul Boutique bags and in the middle we had a slogan saying PAULS BOUTIQUE. Are advert was only 17seconds as we didnt have enough time to film because as I said we changed are idea on the last day(we filmed and edited on the last day). 
Are advert came out better then we thought because ME&AFSANA thought we wouldnt have enough time to even film but at the end we tried are hardest to get it finished and we was really happy that we finished.
we was mostly pleased that we changed are idea to Pauls Boutique Bags because the product is more popular are more interesting to the audience. Are target audience was females at any age, we tried to make are advert persuasive by filming different types of PAULS BOUTIQUE BAGS instead of only filming one bag and make it look boring.
 I personally think that are advert wouldn't be successful is selling the product as are advert didn't have enough information and wasn't long enough for the audience to see what type of bags PAULS BOUTIQUE is selling even thou we filmed different types of bags.
I was mostly happy that we filmed different shots in a short amount of time, and we didn't only use one shot on the same product. I was also pleased that we go it finished because I was really worried that we wouldn't finish on time for the deadline.I wasn't happy with my advert for only one reason because it was too short thats what mostly let that product not to be sold. 
I posted my advert on my blog and i received 14 comments, we got some good feedback such as different shots for a 17second advert, however we got comments that weren't that great but those comments are gonna make me improve my work next time.
NEXT TIME,  Im going to think of ONE product i want to advertise and stick to it, not change my mind because it is really hard work filming and editing in the last minute. Im also gonna make sure I use a lot more footage to make my advert longer and make it more persuasive so people can buy the product.



14 comments:

  1. It gives you a variety of different products from Pauls Boutique yet it's too short and doesn't use many different locations.

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  2. Good use of music and tempo. The footage could be longer and have a bit more of a narrative. I like the camera angles.

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  3. nice video but i felt that it was too short.

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  4. I liked the variety of bags used in your advert and the different shots used in 17 seconds .

    Constructive criticism would be is that the advert would be more successful if it was longer and had better maybe even upbeat music.

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  5. I thought for a short clip the different amount of angels and shots used were very good and the audio also went well with the style and motion of the video, I would say make it a bit longer and also display the actual products name more.

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  6. i loved the different varieties of bags and different shots . the backing miusic went realy well with the advert. lykd it soo much that i wished it lasted longer than 16 seconds

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  7. I think the advert was good in showing the product a lot, the music is quite good as well it goes with the motion in the video. However the advert could of done with more shots and angles and maybe should of been made just a little bit longer.

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  8. Your advert was well edited. You used more than one Pauls Boutique bag. I really liked it. The only thing I would say is that you could have used more footage and more than one destination, and you could have made the end shot longer.

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  9. it was casual, but a little bit too short, it was need of more locations, the music was dead.. but it was clear that you are selling Pauls Boutique Bags (Y)

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  10. I think the music went very well you had the focussing and close ups on the product. I would of also of liked to of seen a full shot of the person with the bag. but it was to short and it needed more locations to promote the advert better.

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  11. It was a good advert, you chose something trendy and appealing to teenage girl years, which shows you thought about it.To improve the video I would suggest that it was longer and told more of a story, as the music implies something sad. Although the music was infact well in sync with the video!

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  12. The music went really well with the imagery and the variety of bags used worked well, However it could have done with a range of different locations and distinctive and creative shots.

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  13. only making it 16secs really let your ad down but overall i think the music linked to the visuals and if you had spent a lot of time on it i'm sure it would have been good :D

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  14. I was honsetly quite let down by this Advert. I saw it having so much potensial. What you did with it was a great start to what could have been a some good work. The like the way u went about presenting the different 'Paul's Boutiqe' Bags and the song chosen went well with it too. :D

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